Please give me feedback.
Thursday, November 7, 2019
Thursday, October 24, 2019
Thursday, September 26, 2019
Tuesday, September 17, 2019
dogs at the beach
Hey readers this week we wrote our writing assement.
The teachers told us to use our descriptive language to describe a picture.
we had 45 mins.
I have edited mine.
Please give me feedback on my descriptive language.
Friday, September 13, 2019
Monday, September 9, 2019
Thursday, August 29, 2019
Tuesday, August 27, 2019
A NZ crocodile???
Have you thought that there might have been a NZ crocodile if you don't your wrong!!!
Here is a recording:
Thursday, August 22, 2019
Friday, August 16, 2019
The question game!!!
hey I have made a game were you have to say the question to for anwser.
for example if one of the anwsers were banana the question would be what's your favourite fruit.
for example if one of the anwsers were banana the question would be what's your favourite fruit.
hrerare some question starters.
who
what
when
why
how
hope you like it!!
Wednesday, August 14, 2019
student shouldn't get paid to go to school!!!!!
hey I have another piece of persuasive writing hope you like it.
Monday, August 12, 2019
Friday, August 9, 2019
pokemon
hey I have bean working with this poster site here is mine it is not finished please tell me what you think of the unfinished product tell me what to do next.
Thursday, August 8, 2019
Wednesday, July 31, 2019
should people use animals for work?
hey readers have you ever thought about how much we use animals for work this is what i think about using animals for work please tell me what you think of it.
Friday, July 26, 2019
shout out.
shout out.
hey readers I'v been learning about screencastifiy It is site that we use for videos.
This my shout out.
This my shout out.
Thursday, July 4, 2019
My who wants to be millionaire quiz
Hi there I have made a quiz please do the quiz and tell me what you think of it.
Wednesday, July 3, 2019
spiderman story ending
hi readers we have been working on a spiderman story we had to make a different ending for the story here is my'n please tell me if you like it.
Thursday, June 27, 2019
Thursday, June 20, 2019
weapons of mass description
Hi Kees here I have been working on my blooms tasks here is my work and also please tell me what you think of it.
Thursday, June 13, 2019
description
here is my description of a image:
It is dawn as airplane flies over clouds that look like candy floss.
The pilot moves in his white shirt and black pants he looks at the controls.
Inside of the cockpit has black bits and bobs and a green radar screen.
The brown and black box shaped like a coffee cup is warm.
The sun is like gleaming Gold with rays of light surrounding it.
The sky is like day and night merging with bluey yellow.
So as the captain says to the passengers “it's time for breakfast” the sleepy passengers start eating.
Tuesday, June 11, 2019
Thursday, June 6, 2019
educational picture (not)
Hi i have created a description of a educational picture ( It is not a educational picture) please tell me if you can picture this in your mind from my amazing writing.
Friday, May 24, 2019
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