Hey readers this week new reading we had new books to choose from I chose "What's the matter?"
We had to make a thing called a comix to show what you thought would happen after the story ended.
This was the walt for this week: use info in the text to make inferences
This is my recount of the story story:
Dan's father tossed the flyer onto the table.
"Who sends this rubbish?"
Dan read it. "The amazing matter mover! Free trial! Name anything - the matter mover makes it appear!"
He said nothing, but on the way to school the next morning, he posted a letter with the flyer inside.
On saturday morning, Dan's parents were busy in the back garden when Dan heard a van pull into the drive and zoom off. On the porch lay a small parcel with his name on it.
In his bedroom, he pulled off the paper. There sat a little black Cube like a tiny TV.
Another fly lay on top. "The matter mover. Name anything, and the matter mover makes it appear!" Underneath the letters "Test model. No orders over three words. say cancel to remove object."
Dan placed the tiny black cube on the floor.
Should he tell his parents? Nah this was his. He'd keep it forever.
No orders over three words. He took a deep breath, counted inside his head and said "Heaps of ice-cream."
The matter mover glowed for a second. The air around it shimmered. Then Dan looked and saw lots of ice-cream with no box he said "Cancel!" he kept doing saying cancel each time the matter mover did something wrong. and then his dad came and Dan shouted "Cancel!"
This my ending:
Hello Kees, Its me Daniel
ReplyDeleteI like this comic you have made.
This reminds me of when someone asked me "what will you choose to do if you had 2 hours to do it"
could you change the boom thing it does not make sense