My name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
Well done on your first SLJ blog post! I can see you’ve worked hard making a slideshow and adding captions to the images! Ka pai! I particularly like how you’ve explained the task for your readers, and made the story your own.
It seems like two friends teasing each other which tells a compelling comic story really. Hopefully the two friends are mindful of each other’s feelings and don’t hurt them. What do you think will happen next after your captioned images?
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships, not fishy teeth, though it is pretty funny.
Good job on starting the Summer Learning Journey, I look forward to seeing all your future blog posts! What activities are you most excited for?
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
Well done on your first SLJ blog post! I can see you’ve worked hard making a slideshow and adding captions to the images! Ka pai! I particularly like how you’ve explained the task for your readers, and made the story your own.
It seems like two friends teasing each other which tells a compelling comic story really. Hopefully the two friends are mindful of each other’s feelings and don’t hurt them. What do you think will happen next after your captioned images?
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships, not fishy teeth, though it is pretty funny.
Good job on starting the Summer Learning Journey, I look forward to seeing all your future blog posts! What activities are you most excited for?
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)